[翻译] “天空未留痕迹，鸟儿却已飞过”

圣皮埃尔的男人

天空未留痕迹，鸟儿却已飞过

　　网上有这句话的翻译，各有千秋：
　　Without any trace in the sky, the bird has already flown by.

　　Before the sky could trail it, the bird had quietly left.

　　A bird skimmed by,leaving the sky slightly disturbed.

　　The original piece by R. Tagore in his Fireflies　is

　　　　　　　　I leave no trace of wings in the air,
　　　　　　　　but I am glad I have had my flight.

［此帖子已被 圣皮埃尔的男人 在 2004-4-14 10:50:15 编辑过］

大饼脸

I like the first sentence.

Harvey

I guess the translation should follow the original meaning, so I support the first interpretation.

wxf19861003

The third one.

sotonhuo

呵呵   英文翻译都还好   只是中文翻译是否应该是“天空没有留下翅膀的痕迹，但我骄傲我飞翔过”？？？？

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风中飞翔

The bird had flown by,  but left nothing !