玉笙寒 发表于 2012-2-5 23:53:00

[原创]《采桑子*忆梅》

<h2 class="titName SG_txta" id="t_414797550100dnaj">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 《采桑子*忆梅》</h2>
<p class="titName SG_txta">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 去岁春节,购得白梅一株,疏影横斜,暗香满室。</p>
<p class="titName SG_txta">每念春日又近,常思之不已。</p>
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<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr> 铅华洗尽曾孤倚,</p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr> 减却清光,</p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr> 留却清香,</p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr> 一点芳心凝素霜。</p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>几番魂梦寻纤影,</p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr> 日也思量,</p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>夜也思量,</p>
<p>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>&nbsp;<wbr>除却梅花不断肠!</p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2012-2-6 15:01:20编辑过]

草长鹰飞 发表于 2012-2-6 07:25:00

<p>1:图片真雅气。</p>
<p>2:可能是您才来不久不大熟悉咱们版里的规则。我有责任跟您说一下。咱们这个版是文字版,不大欢迎图片。原因呢,图片对文字有伤害,侵占压缩文字的表达空间。楼主抽时间处理处理如何,谢谢您了!!</p>
<p>3:问候您!!</p>

草长鹰飞 发表于 2012-2-8 10:15:00

<p>丰子恺题画句:小桌呼朋三面坐,留将一面与梅花。</p>
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<p>此联出自清人何钱《普和看梅云》。</p>
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<p>我喜其中 桌 字拙朴,曾试以 月 雪 亭 山 诸字 易之,景深有了,浮华多了。</p>

玉笙寒 发表于 2012-2-8 12:33:00

<p>诚然!若易以“小几”。似乎有几分雅,但远不敌“桌”字拙朴。</p>
<p>近颇喜一联,录以共享:“闲贪茗碗成请癖;老觉梅花是故人!”</p>

草长鹰飞 发表于 2012-2-8 15:16:00

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>玉笙寒</i>在2012-2-8 12:33:00的发言:</b><br/>
<p>诚然!若易以“小几”。似乎有几分雅,但远不敌“桌”字拙朴。</p>
<p>近颇喜一联,录以共享:“闲贪茗碗成请癖;老觉梅花是故人!”</p></div>
<p>王渔阳的祖父是王象晋,我特喜那本《二如亭群芳谱》,那本书有意思,里面讲了养鹤的事儿,还有靥接法,都特好玩儿。</p>
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<p>^_^</p>

玉笙寒 发表于 2012-2-8 19:56:00

<p>多谢推荐,一定找来一读。</p>
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