云飞风散 发表于 2009-9-4 09:25:00

遥远的地方

 
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路丁 发表于 2009-9-6 09:22:00

我前面也看到您的几首诗，何不将其编辑在一起，作为自己的诗集~

宿城小雪 发表于 2009-9-6 09:08:00

读到第三句就不认识字了

宿城小雪 发表于 2009-9-6 09:10:00

温床，贬义用得多，词性有变。改暖床好些。

心灵之花 发表于 2009-9-5 15:29:00

<p><strong><font color="#ff0000" size="5">楼主：文笔非常好！俺喜欢！可以连续写下去，也可以谱曲写成一首歌子，总之非常好！</font></strong></p>
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心灵之花 发表于 2009-9-8 19:20:00

<p>楼主：俺看您的这个《遥远的地方》命题，完全可以写成长句，一定能出彩，因为俺尝试过，只要功夫到，任何事都可以成为现实，您有自己的博客吧？把自己的诗歌放在里面，自然就成了有特色的诗集，如果能让大家浏览，就能展示自己的文采，何乐而不为呢？</p>

雨烟濛濛 发表于 2009-9-8 19:39:00

&nbsp;诗不错，继续写，会出成绩的。

云飞风散 发表于 2009-9-8 10:19:00

朋友你很好玩的，太会夸人啦！写写玩玩而已，出诗集？没可能吧？

云飞风散 发表于 2009-9-8 10:24:00

谢谢版主夸奖！希望多多赐教，但不包括接龙。

云飞风散 发表于 2010-3-29 16:54:00

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