横窗瘦影 发表于 2009-7-3 23:07:00

[原创]学效苏小妹首尾循环诗

 
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<p><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: fuchsia">赏花归去春絮催,</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: fuchsia">去春絮催红雪飞;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: fuchsia">红雪飞映江楼月,</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: fuchsia">映江楼月赏花归<span lang="EN-US">~~~~</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black"><o:p></o:p></span></p></span></strong></span></font></font>

心灵之花 发表于 2009-7-4 09:21:00

<p><strong><font color="#ff0000" size="5">转帖一首:</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#008000" size="6">&nbsp;黄鹤楼阅长江流,<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; 阅长江流江汉头,<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; 流江汉头仙驾鹤,<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp; 头仙驾鹤黄鹤楼。</font></strong></p>

心灵之花 发表于 2009-7-4 09:24:00

<p><strong><font color="#ff0000" size="5">转帖再一首:</font></strong></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; COLOR: fuchsia; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"><strong><font color="#008000">&nbsp;桃花源面向江沅</font></strong><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><strong><font color="#008000">&nbsp; 面向江沅依山远</font></strong><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><strong><font color="#008000">&nbsp; 沅依山远花溪水</font></strong><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><strong><font color="#008000">&nbsp; 远花溪水桃花源</font></strong></span></p>

心灵之花 发表于 2009-7-4 08:20:00

<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#008000" size="5">楼主推出的首尾循环诗是回文诗的一种文体,在七言诗作中可以看出她有一个比较规范的写作格式,一般头句的前三个字与第四句尾的最后三个字要相扣成题面,即出题者的题面,出题者也可以是作诗者,一般应由上家出一个三字词组作为主题,由下家来作诗,以此类推;每句的后四个字转为下句的前四个字,环环相扣,如果能够合仄押韵,就能构成一首朗朗上口的绝句佳作,玩起来别有一番情趣,大家不妨试着做做,题材不限。</font></strong></p>
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城墙拐弯 发表于 2009-7-4 14:48:00

<p>好</p>

心灵之花 发表于 2009-7-4 17:00:00

<p><strong><font color="#ff0000" size="5">自帖一首:</font></strong></p>
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<p><strong><font color="#008000" size="6">意相随</font></strong></p>
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<p><strong><font color="#008000" size="6">意相随我伴君情,</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font color="#008000" size="6">我伴君情同足金,</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font color="#008000" size="6">情同足金真火炼,</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font color="#008000" size="6">金真火炼意相随。</font></strong></p>

蝶舞 发表于 2009-7-5 15:39:00

<p>&nbsp;<font size="6">&nbsp;&nbsp;<font color="#ff99cc">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <strong>蝶恋花</strong></font></font></p>
<p><font color="#ff99cc" size="6"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 蝶恋花舞曳春风</strong></font></p>
<p><font color="#ff99cc" size="6"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 舞曳春风醉烟雨</strong></font></p>
<p><font color="#ff99cc" size="6"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;风醉烟雨意阑珊</strong></font></p>
<p><font color="#ff99cc" size="6"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;雨意阑珊蝶恋花</strong></font></p>
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路丁 发表于 2009-7-5 21:46:00

横窗老弟:我还真是要好好学学了。

横窗瘦影 发表于 2009-7-5 17:46:00

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<p>更改下排列组合,就成为这样了:))</p>
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<p align="left"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="5"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 雪飞映江楼月</strong></font></p>
<p align="left"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="5"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;红 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;赏</strong></font></p>
<p align="left"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="5"><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 催絮春去归花</strong></font></p>
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